Sunday, March 30, 2014
by ella
Katie walked threw the dark forest. Katie could smell baking but Katie was terrified. She followed the bumpy path to the smell of delicious baking. As Katie got closer to the smell she could feel leaves blowing onto her face. Finally she could see a little Gingerbread house and she was surprised as she thought that it would be a scary forest. She could taste the toffee. Then she heard another "bang bang bang" but it was nothing.
The End
The End
As Mary sprinted through the dark gloomy woods she could hear a loud howling and a sudden rustling.Then Mary paused in her tracks and heard a load crunching of leaves. Mary turned to see a cute little bunny rabbit and she was very relived that it was nothing big and scary. Mary could smell a revolting stench as she past the mushy smelly bog but soon the air was was lovely and fresh. Mary could taste a gallon of fear as she spotted the huge grey wolf up ahead but to her relief it was well gone by the time she got to the rock that the wolf was sitting on. Mary could see lots of bushes and trees surrounding her and a river rushing madly.The moon got bigger and brighter so that Mary was all most blinded but soon it dimmed.Mary was horrified but finally she was at the big stone castle. Her heart was pounding in her chest as she entered the castle.
The dark forest By Carrigan
Crunch,crunch,crunch, Lauren heard while sprinting through scary,dark forest.Lauren could feel the icy wind rushing against her tanned face. Lauren saw the bright,yellow moon shining towards her.Then Lauren heard a howling noise. "Ahhhhhhhhh" screamed Lauren in fear."I want to go home and see Inka my next door neighbours kitten" but that howling noise was actually a dog practising her howling. Lauren could smell the mouldy,rotting trees.Slam! Lauren heard a wooden door slamming shut.
The End.
The End.
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