Sunday, November 10, 2013

Fear
Fear is like standing in a pitch black room with frightning noises all around you.

Fear is feeling worried and the taste of hot jalapenos.

Fear smells like deep sadness all around you


By toby
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4 comments:

  1. grantsbraesNovember 10, 2013 at 2:58 PM

    star I like how you said red hot chili jalapenos

    by eli

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  2. grantsbraesNovember 10, 2013 at 3:00 PM

    Please put your name , I like your smell sentence .From Charlotte.

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  3. grantsbraesNovember 10, 2013 at 3:02 PM

    I like the way you said pitch black room.

    from MEGAN

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  4. grantsbraesNovember 10, 2013 at 3:04 PM

    WISH: Put some verbs!
    STAR: We like the smell sentance!

    By Ellie and Elsha!!!

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