Wednesday, March 26, 2014

The forest by Tejal

 Crack! Miss  Newton  stepped  on  a  broken  branch  as  she  skipped  into  the  deep  dark  forest.  She  did  not  know  that  she  was  going  to  be  very  very  very  scared.  Miss  Newton  felt a breeze  on  her  face.  As  she  looked  up  she  could  see  the  big  bright  moon and  the  scary  shadows  were  coming  at  her. She  saw  old  trees and  she  saw  old  mud. She  shook  with  fear. 

By Tejal

The Wolf by Regan

As I turned my back I felt wolf fur on the tree. I could smell the dirt. I killed the tree. Timber!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The wolf got so distracted by the purple moon so I got away and the wolf howled as loud as the creaky wind.


By Regan

Forest by Martha

Crunch, crunch, crunch as Alli slowly skipped across the muddy colourful leaves.She could see lots of gloomy shadows lurking down on the rotten leaves lying on the cold hard ground.''Eww''Alli said because she could smell a disgusting odour coming from the frightening river behind her.She could hear the rustling of the leaves.As Alli slowly skipped through the creepy forest she heard a wolf howling at the bright moon Alli felt a shiver run down her back.



Tuesday, March 4, 2014

CRAZY 5

Welcome to Room 3' blog. On this blog we will publish our writing and give feedback to others about their writing. We hope you enjoy the writing we put on here.

Here are some children's crazy 5 pieces of writing that Miss Collins published for them. She will put more up during the next few weeks. Feel free to comment on what you like about the piece of writing.