Welcome to Room 3' blog. On this blog we will publish our writing and give feedback to others about their writing. We hope you enjoy the writing we put on here.
Here are some children's crazy 5 pieces of writing that Miss Collins published for them. She will put more up during the next few weeks. Feel free to comment on what you like about the piece of writing.
Regan I like how you started with a hook. It really made me want to read on.
ReplyDeleteYour wish is to see if you can add some adjectives into your writing.
Miss Collins :)
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DeleteCJ I really like how you said you were swinging and sliding.
ReplyDeleteYour wish is to tell me how you felt on the boat.
Miss Collins
Wow CJ great story, it sounds very exciting it made me want to come on the jet boat with you. Well done
DeleteKatie B I really like how you started with a hook.
ReplyDeleteYour wish is to add a bit more detail to your writing.