''Claire, Claire"came a voice in the wind. Claire felt a icy shiver run down her back as she sprinted with a horrible drag. Suddenly a strong stinky smell came across Claire .She stepped back onto to the dry crunchy leaves in the dark forest so she had a better view so she could see where the stinky odour was coming from.It appeared to be coming from a swamp and then the voice came back saying ''Claire your late''. It scared her so a cold shiver rushed up her boney spine and flash Claire woke up all sweaty and hot like she had been sleeping in the butterfly museum but it turned out to be Claire's Mum saying ''Claire your late for School''.
Wow such an expressive description Alli. It was very exciting to read. I'm so proud of your effort! Mum .
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