Kayaking by Lucas

Boy Wonder by Sophia

by ella

Katie walked threw the dark forest. Katie could smell baking  but Katie was terrified. She followed the bumpy path to the smell of delicious baking. As Katie got closer to the smell she could feel leaves blowing onto her face. Finally she could see a little Gingerbread house and she was surprised as she thought that it would be a scary forest. She could taste the toffee. Then she heard another "bang bang bang" but it was nothing. 

The End

As Mary sprinted through the dark gloomy woods she could hear a loud howling and a sudden rustling.Then Mary paused  in her tracks and heard a load crunching of leaves. Mary turned to see a cute little bunny rabbit and she was very relived that it was nothing big and scary. Mary could smell a revolting stench as she past the mushy smelly bog but soon the air was was lovely and fresh. Mary could taste a gallon of fear as she spotted the huge grey wolf up ahead but to her relief it was well gone by the time she got to the rock that the wolf was sitting on. Mary could see lots of bushes and trees surrounding her and a river rushing madly.The moon got bigger and brighter so that Mary was all most blinded but soon it dimmed.Mary was horrified but finally she was at the big stone castle. Her heart was pounding in her chest as she entered the castle.

Kayaking by Regan

As Jackson did a 360 Jackson crashed into a thick rock. Jackson got his kayak up but the foaming waterfall tipped his kayak. Jackson body slammed and fell out of his kayak. Then he went down a dark cave and got a torch.

By Regan

The dark forest By Carrigan

Crunch,crunch,crunch, Lauren heard while sprinting through scary,dark forest.Lauren could feel the icy wind rushing against her tanned face. Lauren saw the bright,yellow moon shining towards her.Then Lauren heard a howling noise. "Ahhhhhhhhh" screamed Lauren in fear."I want to go home and see Inka my next door neighbours kitten" but that howling noise was actually a dog practising her howling. Lauren could smell the mouldy,rotting trees.Slam! Lauren heard a wooden door slamming shut.

 The End.

Forest by carter

Carter jumped over the big tall fence and zoomed down the path.Carter could smell the very rotten trees.Carter started to get chased by a pack of wolves.Carter jumped into a tree and he felt scared.Carter heard the big wolf's howling at the bright moon.

Forest By Katie C

Pippy walked slowly down the mushy crooked path. Pippy heard a loud cracking sound. Pippy started to feel scared. Pippy scanned the forest for any sign of danger. It seemed to Pippy that every inch of the forest was danger. The bright moon was leading her further and further into the forest.
As Pippy walked deeper into the forest she heard a loud howling noise.Birds were squawking above her head. Pippy saw black shadows all around her cold body.The freezing mist was turning all the trees into frozen hard ice.

The Forsest By Alli

''Claire, Claire"came a voice in the wind. Claire felt a icy shiver run down her back as she sprinted with a horrible drag. Suddenly a strong stinky smell came across Claire .She stepped back onto to the dry crunchy leaves in the dark forest so she had a better view so she could see where the stinky odour was coming from.It appeared to be coming from a swamp and then the voice came back saying ''Claire your late''. It scared her so a cold shiver rushed up her boney spine and flash Claire woke up all sweaty and hot like she had been sleeping in the butterfly museum but it turned out to be Claire's Mum saying ''Claire your late for School''.

Harry story

Crack,crack,Harry head when he was going through the rotten forest.Howl,howl Harry heard.Harry smelt damp mud everywhere.Harry looked at the shiny moon. It's beautiful he thought.Splash, Harry heard. Who's there?Harry felt a cold shiver down his boney hard spine. Suddenly a cold wind blew.Harry started to walk faster.Plop! Harry was stuck in sticky mud.Harry tasted gross stuff in the air and it was getting grosser.Howl Harry heard again.Harry was struggling for his life."Finally"Harry got out of the sticky mud .Harry started to run.Ouch Harry fell onto his grassy backyard.

Forest by Carrigan

Scrunch,scrunch,scrunch heard Amy while sprinting through the dark forest.Amy could feel the icy wind rushing against  her pale face.Amy could see the bright,yellow moon and shadows lurking around her "Ahhhhhh this is a creepy dark,scary forest I want to go home and curl up in bed with a hot-chocolate and a marshmallow in the drink to make it taster".Amy could smell the rotting trees around her in the very dark,scary forest all alone.Amy headed towards the ruins of a very old castle.

Forest by Matthew C

As Travis was walking in to the woods he heard a howl.So he ran.ran,ran and ran. He ran so far that he found a dead person from prison. Then in front of  Travis he saw a rotten tree.

Setting Description by max

I ran through the cold dark forest and I could hear a water fall close by so I kept on running. I saw a water fall racing down a stone wall so I thought should I go in or go into the forest. Then behind me there were a pack of wolves. I'll go in, I don't want to go in the forest so I went in and at the door was a dark vader which had a light saver. Then all of a sudden there was a light saver in my hand so I killed him. Then my light saver had a gun on the end. Cool I thought and I started shooting at the house. It flew upstairs and then a spider feel down from the roof.

Forest Description by Lauren

Kate ran through the big forest then stopped because there was a pack of wolfs. She did not move and finally made a decision to run the other way. Her heart was pounding like popping candy and Kate did not stop running until a big river appeared in front of her. So she thought should I go back but she said "nah" when she heard the wolfs howling. 

The forest by Kate

Stomp stomp as Kate went in the forest. Kate saw the bright moon as she crept.   

The forest by Caleb

 Caleb sprinted to the dark grey brick castle but there was no way in. Caleb crept into the dark forest again and he saw yellow eye's coming closer and closer to him. Suddenly Caleb saw a huge pack of crows flying out of the dark wooden trees. Caleb saw the huge bright moon up in the starry dark sky.

Forest Description by Jackson

George was running through the weird forest and water was rushing down from the sky.In the distance George could hear wolves howling and big leaves cracking on the cold ground.Suddenly big hail storm rushed down from the sky and the bright moon shone out of the black woods.Then the smell of rotten tree's filled his nose.Later he made it to a giant castle.He opened the creaking black wooden doors then someone small came to the door. It was the evil empire.

by Jackson       

The forest by Tejal

 Crack! Miss  Newton  stepped  on  a  broken  branch  as  she  skipped  into  the  deep  dark  forest.  She  did  not  know  that  she  was  going  to  be  very  very  very  scared.  Miss  Newton  felt a breeze  on  her  face.  As  she  looked  up  she  could  see  the  big  bright  moon and  the  scary  shadows  were  coming  at  her. She  saw  old  trees and  she  saw  old  mud. She  shook  with  fear. 

By Tejal

The Wolf by Regan

As I turned my back I felt wolf fur on the tree. I could smell the dirt. I killed the tree. Timber!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The wolf got so distracted by the purple moon so I got away and the wolf howled as loud as the creaky wind.

By Regan

Forest by Martha

Crunch, crunch, crunch as Alli slowly skipped across the muddy colourful leaves.She could see lots of gloomy shadows lurking down on the rotten leaves lying on the cold hard ground.''Eww''Alli said because she could smell a disgusting odour coming from the frightening river behind her.She could hear the rustling of the leaves.As Alli slowly skipped through the creepy forest she heard a wolf howling at the bright moon Alli felt a shiver run down her back.

Water balloon fight by Martha

Sky diving by Carrigan

CRAZY 5

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Here are some children's crazy 5 pieces of writing that Miss Collins published for them. She will put more up during the next few weeks. Feel free to comment on what you like about the piece of writing.