Wednesday, September 3, 2014

Roller Coaster by Caleb Worsnop

"Loop" shouted Jack. " I don't really like going upside down it makes me get sick". I could see the roller coaster going up side down and as quick as a mouse it zoomed into the water.

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  1. grantsbraesSeptember 3, 2014 at 5:33 PM

    I like how you said ... I could see the roller coaster going upside down and as quick as a mouse it zoomed into the water.

    Your next step is to tell me what you could hear and feel .

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