Wednesday, September 3, 2014

Roller Coaster by Genevieve

"Ahhh" I screamed as I got closer and closer to the bright blue water. I could see the still water below me and I could feel the wind whistling against my pale face. I could smell the fresh blue water.

 By Genevieve


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  1. grantsbraesSeptember 3, 2014 at 5:31 PM

    I like how you said that you screamed as you got closer and closer to the bright blue water because it paints a picture in my head.

    Your wish is to use different sentence starters.

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