" I am so excited for the roller coaster ride" I said. I could see the water splashing and people screaming as they went down in the water. It was my go to go on the big roller coaster. My heart was pounding very fast as I went down in the water. When I was in the water some water sprayed on me. The ride was done and I had fun.
By Kate
By Kate
I like how you said that your heart was pounding very fast because it shows me that you are scared.
ReplyDeleteYour next step is to try use other words for went eg zoomed, flew
From Miss Collins