"Ahhhhhhhh" we screamed as we were going down the roller coaster then went down into the water. The roller coaster slowed down and stopped!! " Ha, it stopped". I bet is is because we could look at the fishhhhhhh! As we were going down I could feel the air and we were at the start again.
By Matthew C
By Matthew C
I like how you said the roller coaster slowed down and stopped!
ReplyDeleteYour next step is to try and use your senses to paint a picture in the readers head.
From Miss Collins