The Roller Coaster by Kate

" I am so excited for the roller coaster ride" I said. I could see the water splashing and people screaming as they went down in the water. It was my go to go on the big roller coaster. My heart was pounding very fast as I went down in the water. When I was in the water some water sprayed on me. The ride was done and I had fun.

By Kate

Roller Coaster by Genevieve

"Ahhh" I screamed as I got closer and closer to the bright blue water. I could see the still water below me and I could feel the wind whistling against my pale face. I could smell the fresh blue water.

By Genevieve

Roller Coaster by Lucas

Splash!  I went into the water tunnel. The tunnel was filled with water. Then we went up a hill we went zooming fast down the hill. When the ride was over I said " That was fun".

By Lucas Olsen

Roller Coaster by Matthew C

"Ahhhhhhhh" we screamed as we were going down the roller coaster then went down into the water. The roller coaster slowed down and stopped!! " Ha, it stopped". I bet is is because we could look at the fishhhhhhh! As we were going down I could feel the air and we were at the start again.

By Matthew C

Roller Coaster by Caleb Worsnop

"Loop" shouted Jack. " I don't really like going upside down it makes me get sick". I could see the roller coaster going up side down and as quick as a mouse it zoomed into the water.

By Caleb

5 Senses

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something fishy by sophia

Wishoowishoowishoo went the shiny red washing machine. 'When is it going to stop' mumbled lulu then lulu saw a light she walked to it and opened the door. In astonishment lulu leaped back because the water did not come out . 'wow'! lulu said and poked around. Lulu wanted to go in so lulu took a deep breath and dived.It's very smelly and dark down hear lulu thought. she swam a little further and then lulu saw a shadow coming closer and closer it looked like a pair of jeans but with ginormas nashing teeth and big bold eyes.