The Roller Coaster by Kate

" I am so excited for the roller coaster ride" I said. I could see the water splashing and people screaming as they went down in the water. It was my go to go on the big roller coaster. My heart was pounding very fast as I went down in the water. When I was in the water some water sprayed on me. The ride was done and I had fun.

By Kate

Roller Coaster by Genevieve

"Ahhh" I screamed as I got closer and closer to the bright blue water. I could see the still water below me and I could feel the wind whistling against my pale face. I could smell the fresh blue water.

By Genevieve

Roller Coaster by Lucas

Splash!  I went into the water tunnel. The tunnel was filled with water. Then we went up a hill we went zooming fast down the hill. When the ride was over I said " That was fun".

By Lucas Olsen

Roller Coaster by Matthew C

"Ahhhhhhhh" we screamed as we were going down the roller coaster then went down into the water. The roller coaster slowed down and stopped!! " Ha, it stopped". I bet is is because we could look at the fishhhhhhh! As we were going down I could feel the air and we were at the start again.

By Matthew C

Roller Coaster by Caleb Worsnop

"Loop" shouted Jack. " I don't really like going upside down it makes me get sick". I could see the roller coaster going up side down and as quick as a mouse it zoomed into the water.

By Caleb

5 Senses

W.A.L.T
Use our 5 senses to write a moment in time .

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- 5 senses
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- Compound sentences.

Watch this video clip then fill in your senses chart.

something fishy by sophia

Wishoowishoowishoo went the shiny red washing machine. 'When is it going to stop' mumbled lulu then lulu saw a light she walked to it and opened the door. In astonishment lulu leaped back because the water did not come out . 'wow'! lulu said and poked around. Lulu wanted to go in so lulu took a deep breath and dived.It's very smelly and dark down hear lulu thought. she swam a little further and then lulu saw a shadow coming closer and closer it looked like a pair of jeans but with ginormas nashing teeth and big bold eyes.

Ch ching as john paid for a ten minute wash about one hour later he started to get confused. He  wondered  what had happened he went to the counter he said "when is it going to be ready suddenly flash john went to the washing machine and opened it  and saw with amazement and the wash Machine was a blob of water in it . As John jumped in to the hole he saw a few sock fish as he kept swimming down deeper, he started to see a bluey black t- shirt sting ray racing towards him. He stung and tried to bite him. John swam back up and saw a light and went out and touched the t-shirt sting ray behind him the sting ray was there and he said I think those are mine

Something fishy by Kate

Whoosh whoosh as the wishing machine started to finish. Sparkles saw the bright blue water. She walked slowly to open the door of the wishing machine. The water didn't spill out. She took a big breath and swam in.Sparkles loved the sock fish who were swimming fast in the water. Sparkles caught one it was colourful but the sock fish swam away. Suddenly a big shark that was a pair of jeans started to chase her. She swam away very fast. She got out of the washing machine in time. Sparkles heart was pounding really fast she was scared. She tried to touch the jeans but the shark was following her out of the washing machine. A boy said " I think those are mine".

By Kate

Something Fishy By Carrigan.

"Ugghh,why is this taking so long just to wast 10 pairs of colorful T-shirts Amy thought imnpationtly while tapping her red,shiny,new shoe on the glistening floor.Then Amy saw a bright glow out of the corner  of her light blue eye.Amy wondered 'What was the bright glow I saw just then'.Creak went the old wooden chair as Amy slowly got off the chair she had been sitting on for ages.'WOW!I can see an orange sock fish'Amy thought confused how there was an orange sock fish swimming in a shiny,white washing machine.Plop,Amys pale face went in and she was amazed to see colorful sock fish swimming around.Then Amys whole slim pale body went in the shiny,white washing machine.Amy swam further and further into the shiny,white washing machine then a shark (that was actually jeans) swam as fast as a cheetah could go.'Whew that was a close one I could of been eaten.Amy thought as the shark kept swimming towards Amy.Then Amy saw a light and she swam fast and she was out!The End

Die! Die! Said Harrison when he was on his brown iPad playing minecraft  killing a green and blue and black zombie. Then boom! The washing mashing stopped. NOOOOOOOOOOO! Harrison shouted. It was only one milla second left then a blue  light went flash. Harrison said "what just happend ?"He walked over to the washing machine. Harrison opened the door Harrison was surprised no water came out. Harrison carefully stuck his head the washing mashing he saw a gold fish. He swam in to the oshon and he saw blue red and green fish. Then Harrison saw the gold fish Harrison swam to wards the gold fish but then Harrison saw poison shoot past. Harrison lookerpd back it was the red fish. He saw a light  he swam and swam and swam. When Harrison got to the light the poison fish swam away and then Harrison swam to the top and came out of the washing machine. Then a dolphin came up and said "I think those ear mine"

Something fishy by Tejal

Tap, tap went Rosella's feet as she heard the washing machine go around quietly. She peeked into the washing machine . She saw deep blue water. Rosella said "this look's like a deep blue house for me".It was a beautiful deep blue house. Suddenly a shark swam at Rosella . She looked behind then she saw a spikey shark. She said "ahhh this is a scary shark, I'm going from here because I am very scared". Rosella saw sock fish swimming and wriggling around .  She  swam and swam and she hid behind a tree and she saw a  bright moon it was her way out of  the washing machine. When she got out of the washing machine shook with fear .Then a shark said "that's mine" so she gave his one and she got her's too. And  she went home.

By Tejal

The eel by Lucas

Caleb was watching the machine for along time. " I'm bored"  said Caleb. Caleb saw a big flash. Caleb

got such a big fright. "What was that?" thought Caleb. He opened the door and Caleb was astonished

Caleb went in the washing machine. Caleb was swimming happily until the eel came and Caleb started

zooming fast to get out. Caleb got bit by the eel. "Ouch" said Caleb. I'm not going here again.


By Lucas  

Matthews great adventure

Beep beep as Matthew was playing on his ipod.Matthew was in a washing machine building.Matthew was on his ipod sitting on a seat.Matthew saw something dark blue in the corner of his eye.What is it?Matthew thought.Matthew crept over to the door.Matthew opened the white door but no water bursted out.Matthew was surprised .He held his breath and entered the washing machine.Wow this is beautiful he said in his mind.A gold sock fish swam past.Matthew could see heaps of different culerd sock fish and a blue t-shirt octopus.Then another gold sock fish swam past.Matthew decided to follow it. Suddenly he saw a dark grew figure and it was swimming in a straight line towards him.then ginormous teeth appeared. Matthew saw a blue shark that was pants so Matthew swam as fast as he could to the washing machine door and zoomed out of it.But the pants also popped outMatthew poked hid dark yellow finger to touch it.I think they ate mine said a shiny grey shark that was standing up


The end

bob is evil and is a bully he has long nails and small eyes and is creep .He is lonely because he is a big strong bully bob had black hair and he bits. He had red eye  and brows skinny arm but they're long like spider are going to bits you.

By Regan

Something Fishy by Genevieve

Why is this taking so long thought Lucy. I only put my washing on for one minute. suddenly Lucy saw a very blue bright light what is that thought Lucy . She  hop in it and Lucy saw some sock fish and a Octopus Lucy saw pink seaweed  and a little sock fish . suddenly she saw a shark that looked like trousers . Lucy heart started to pound very very very fast in her chest she started to swim fast . Lucy thought that she saw a good hiding please then she saw a bright light Lucy started to swim towards it . the shark chased her with its sharp teeth. she crawled out of the big hole Lucy was shaking like she was on top of a washing machine.

WHOO Charli screamed as she jumped rock to rock. After that Charli explored the jungle her black braided hair swept across her face as she swang from vine to vine she was as tall as a young bear standing up and her Mum and Dad say she is very nice and not even like a bear and when she got home her smile did'nt fad away for along time . 10 yers later Charli is 18 now she has grown bright blue stripson her bright blue face. ''today i am leaving my house Charli said crying to her friends he r friends wee gutted because Charli could'nt live with out her faimly her friends told her that every avatar has to leave when they are 18.

Bang,bang Aww that must of hirt really bad I thought.Here comes some big people lets get locked and,I hered.I sat as still as a nice dog so the enemies couldn't hear me.I started to have big drops of water flow down my face and it got faster and faster as my friend did

the forest by Lauren

Kate ran through the big forest then stopped because there was a pack of hungry wolves . She did not move and finally she made a decision to run the other way .Her heart was pounding  like popping candy and Kate did not stop running until a big river appeared in front of her. She thought should I go back? but she said NEVER after she heard the wolves howling so she jumped into the big river she felt like an ice cube. She finally got across and someone found her and drove her home.

Animal language

Animal language

MIAOW! a tiny miaow echoed down the dark,dark hallway."What's wrong Pumpkin!?"shouted Sessomnio the old ugly potion maker.Yow!went Pumpkin as she crept along the soft orange carpet."I don't speak cat language!"shouted Sessomnio."Here this will help"said Sessomio as she placed a coller as hard as stone around Pumpkin's ginger neck."Speak" shouted she shouted,Pumpkin yowled "FOOD""ok why didn't you say so" said Sessomnio Sessomnio placed a bowl infront of Pumpkin.Now Pumpkin can have her food and talk!


by mia

the farmes.

"BOOM BOOM"echoed the powerful gun. Regan,Jackson and George fired tiny bullets at fat chickens. They drove in their muddy trucks back to the yards where they kept the sheep before they  shear them. They drove fast back to the very flash house where the flash cars were kept in the garage."Who's been cooking plum pie"shouted Regan. They plucked the fat chickens and got all the stuff you can eat.They  had plum pie and chicken for Jackson 27th birthday they had a huge feast.

By Jackson

avatar katie c

Gabrial pounced on a bird like a cat (even though she has no idea what a cat is.)Gabrial has nice long, black braided hair that looks like a field of licorice. She pulled her long black braided hair back behind her blue ears and called for a Carlos bird.Then a big blue bird flew down.It was a huge Carlos bird.Gabrial jumped onto the huge Carlos bird.She loves flying on Carlos birds.Her blue stripy skin looked like a water fall.The warm breeze gushed past her blue face.She felt proud that she was able to fly a Carlos bird now that she was ten.The Carlos bird stoped at her tree hut.Gabrial snuggled in her nice warm bed and slept the whole night.


By: Katie

Kayaking by Lucas

Boy Wonder by Sophia

by ella

Katie walked threw the dark forest. Katie could smell baking  but Katie was terrified. She followed the bumpy path to the smell of delicious baking. As Katie got closer to the smell she could feel leaves blowing onto her face. Finally she could see a little Gingerbread house and she was surprised as she thought that it would be a scary forest. She could taste the toffee. Then she heard another "bang bang bang" but it was nothing. 

The End

As Mary sprinted through the dark gloomy woods she could hear a loud howling and a sudden rustling.Then Mary paused  in her tracks and heard a load crunching of leaves. Mary turned to see a cute little bunny rabbit and she was very relived that it was nothing big and scary. Mary could smell a revolting stench as she past the mushy smelly bog but soon the air was was lovely and fresh. Mary could taste a gallon of fear as she spotted the huge grey wolf up ahead but to her relief it was well gone by the time she got to the rock that the wolf was sitting on. Mary could see lots of bushes and trees surrounding her and a river rushing madly.The moon got bigger and brighter so that Mary was all most blinded but soon it dimmed.Mary was horrified but finally she was at the big stone castle. Her heart was pounding in her chest as she entered the castle.

Kayaking by Regan

As Jackson did a 360 Jackson crashed into a thick rock. Jackson got his kayak up but the foaming waterfall tipped his kayak. Jackson body slammed and fell out of his kayak. Then he went down a dark cave and got a torch.

By Regan

The dark forest By Carrigan

Crunch,crunch,crunch, Lauren heard while sprinting through scary,dark forest.Lauren could feel the icy wind rushing against her tanned face. Lauren saw the bright,yellow moon shining towards her.Then Lauren heard a howling noise. "Ahhhhhhhhh" screamed Lauren in fear."I want to go home and see Inka my next door neighbours kitten" but that howling noise was actually a dog practising her howling. Lauren could smell the mouldy,rotting trees.Slam! Lauren heard a wooden door slamming shut.

 The End.

Forest by carter

Carter jumped over the big tall fence and zoomed down the path.Carter could smell the very rotten trees.Carter started to get chased by a pack of wolves.Carter jumped into a tree and he felt scared.Carter heard the big wolf's howling at the bright moon.

Forest By Katie C

Pippy walked slowly down the mushy crooked path. Pippy heard a loud cracking sound. Pippy started to feel scared. Pippy scanned the forest for any sign of danger. It seemed to Pippy that every inch of the forest was danger. The bright moon was leading her further and further into the forest.
As Pippy walked deeper into the forest she heard a loud howling noise.Birds were squawking above her head. Pippy saw black shadows all around her cold body.The freezing mist was turning all the trees into frozen hard ice.

The Forsest By Alli

''Claire, Claire"came a voice in the wind. Claire felt a icy shiver run down her back as she sprinted with a horrible drag. Suddenly a strong stinky smell came across Claire .She stepped back onto to the dry crunchy leaves in the dark forest so she had a better view so she could see where the stinky odour was coming from.It appeared to be coming from a swamp and then the voice came back saying ''Claire your late''. It scared her so a cold shiver rushed up her boney spine and flash Claire woke up all sweaty and hot like she had been sleeping in the butterfly museum but it turned out to be Claire's Mum saying ''Claire your late for School''.

Harry story

Crack,crack,Harry head when he was going through the rotten forest.Howl,howl Harry heard.Harry smelt damp mud everywhere.Harry looked at the shiny moon. It's beautiful he thought.Splash, Harry heard. Who's there?Harry felt a cold shiver down his boney hard spine. Suddenly a cold wind blew.Harry started to walk faster.Plop! Harry was stuck in sticky mud.Harry tasted gross stuff in the air and it was getting grosser.Howl Harry heard again.Harry was struggling for his life."Finally"Harry got out of the sticky mud .Harry started to run.Ouch Harry fell onto his grassy backyard.

Forest by Carrigan

Scrunch,scrunch,scrunch heard Amy while sprinting through the dark forest.Amy could feel the icy wind rushing against  her pale face.Amy could see the bright,yellow moon and shadows lurking around her "Ahhhhhh this is a creepy dark,scary forest I want to go home and curl up in bed with a hot-chocolate and a marshmallow in the drink to make it taster".Amy could smell the rotting trees around her in the very dark,scary forest all alone.Amy headed towards the ruins of a very old castle.

Forest by Matthew C

As Travis was walking in to the woods he heard a howl.So he ran.ran,ran and ran. He ran so far that he found a dead person from prison. Then in front of  Travis he saw a rotten tree.

Setting Description by max

I ran through the cold dark forest and I could hear a water fall close by so I kept on running. I saw a water fall racing down a stone wall so I thought should I go in or go into the forest. Then behind me there were a pack of wolves. I'll go in, I don't want to go in the forest so I went in and at the door was a dark vader which had a light saver. Then all of a sudden there was a light saver in my hand so I killed him. Then my light saver had a gun on the end. Cool I thought and I started shooting at the house. It flew upstairs and then a spider feel down from the roof.

Forest Description by Lauren

Kate ran through the big forest then stopped because there was a pack of wolfs. She did not move and finally made a decision to run the other way. Her heart was pounding like popping candy and Kate did not stop running until a big river appeared in front of her. So she thought should I go back but she said "nah" when she heard the wolfs howling. 

The forest by Kate

Stomp stomp as Kate went in the forest. Kate saw the bright moon as she crept.   

The forest by Caleb

 Caleb sprinted to the dark grey brick castle but there was no way in. Caleb crept into the dark forest again and he saw yellow eye's coming closer and closer to him. Suddenly Caleb saw a huge pack of crows flying out of the dark wooden trees. Caleb saw the huge bright moon up in the starry dark sky.

Forest Description by Jackson

George was running through the weird forest and water was rushing down from the sky.In the distance George could hear wolves howling and big leaves cracking on the cold ground.Suddenly big hail storm rushed down from the sky and the bright moon shone out of the black woods.Then the smell of rotten tree's filled his nose.Later he made it to a giant castle.He opened the creaking black wooden doors then someone small came to the door. It was the evil empire.

by Jackson       

The forest by Tejal

 Crack! Miss  Newton  stepped  on  a  broken  branch  as  she  skipped  into  the  deep  dark  forest.  She  did  not  know  that  she  was  going  to  be  very  very  very  scared.  Miss  Newton  felt a breeze  on  her  face.  As  she  looked  up  she  could  see  the  big  bright  moon and  the  scary  shadows  were  coming  at  her. She  saw  old  trees and  she  saw  old  mud. She  shook  with  fear. 

By Tejal

The Wolf by Regan

As I turned my back I felt wolf fur on the tree. I could smell the dirt. I killed the tree. Timber!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The wolf got so distracted by the purple moon so I got away and the wolf howled as loud as the creaky wind.

By Regan

Forest by Martha

Crunch, crunch, crunch as Alli slowly skipped across the muddy colourful leaves.She could see lots of gloomy shadows lurking down on the rotten leaves lying on the cold hard ground.''Eww''Alli said because she could smell a disgusting odour coming from the frightening river behind her.She could hear the rustling of the leaves.As Alli slowly skipped through the creepy forest she heard a wolf howling at the bright moon Alli felt a shiver run down her back.

Water balloon fight by Martha

Sky diving by Carrigan

CRAZY 5

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Here are some children's crazy 5 pieces of writing that Miss Collins published for them. She will put more up during the next few weeks. Feel free to comment on what you like about the piece of writing.