Thursday, October 31, 2013
Wednesday, October 30, 2013
Rain by Jarrod
I am the Rain
I blow the black grey sky away.
I clap high in the grey sky.
I shock the little children the get in my way.
I shout at the people that turn on the lights.
I scare the news reporter people away.
I am the rain.
By Jarrod
TUMBLING TORNADOS
I am a tornado.
I snaffle up the ground like a vacuum cleaner tidying the largest living room EVER.
My stomach growls as I search the delicious land for juicy plants.
I slide down the fluffy clouds, which turn grey as I approach.
I slurp up sheep through my tunnel-like tube of terror.
I giggle as I fade into the dark sky, leaving a black trail of devastation behind me.
I cheekily catapult rocks and bits of gravel at the unsuspecting people.
Volcano
I am a volcano.
For years I grow up for this great moment to make myself a star
From the moment I start spewing out ash people flee in fear.
As I vomit out lava it wraps itself around the sturdy trees.
I tease the animals flinging boiling hot rocks down on top of them.
As an explosion rips me apart
This is the last stage
Volcano Toby
I am a volcano.
I laugh as I destroy the bright beautiful trees.
I cry out the burning hot ash.
I yell as the hot lava comes out my head.
I spew out the hot lava all over the bright tree
I am a volcano
By Toby
I laugh as I destroy the bright beautiful trees.
I cry out the burning hot ash.
I yell as the hot lava comes out my head.
I spew out the hot lava all over the bright tree
I am a volcano
By Toby
Tuesday, October 29, 2013
Tuesday, October 22, 2013
Popcorn
Popcorn popping like a machine gun firing popcorn into my mouth.
Popcorn flying into the air like mini golf balls.
Popcorn feels dry,fragile and delicate to the touch.
Pop pop pop goes popcorn as it launches itself into my mouth.
Popcorn tastes like a heaven all on its own.
When I hear popcorn popping I come running.
I can smell the sweet smell of butter and popcorn a long way away.
My hunting senses are tweaked to hunt popcorn so popcorn watch out
By Eli
By Eli
Tuesday, October 15, 2013
MOVIE ( Forest Gump )
BOOM pieces of dirt went everywhere, a bomb had gone off.
Forest ran away from the area. Forest remebered that he forgot Bubba. Bubba was someone forest meet on the bus. He ran back
to the area, but every time he came back he found someone else.
lastly he found Lutenit Dang. Forest was carrying Dang back when something hit him in the buttox.
BY ETHAN
BOOM pieces of dirt went everywhere, a bomb had gone off.
Forest ran away from the area. Forest remebered that he forgot Bubba. Bubba was someone forest meet on the bus. He ran back
to the area, but every time he came back he found someone else.
lastly he found Lutenit Dang. Forest was carrying Dang back when something hit him in the buttox.
BY ETHAN
Zoom as we raced across the busy motorway. I looked downwards and could make out faint white lines of paint that we were rushing past. My ears were filled with the sound of car tires whooshing across the grey solid concrete road. I could taste the cool fresh air flowing like a river into my mouth that was wide open at the time. I was surrounded by different shades of green on the leaves of different trees and bushes. My brown hair rustled in the wind. "Are we there yet"I grumbled. "We've only been driving for half an hour" my annoying sister replied.
By Sarah.
Sand cliffs at tomahawk
Kerrwomp as the sled crashed into the soft sand "wohooooo" I yelled as I was catapulted into the air. "Oofff" I said as I landed on the hard sand. "You finished the jump Gracsion" I asked "yeah" he yelled back. "Ok I'll try it out". Boogie board or sled?" he asked "boogie board" I replied.I ran up the hill and jumped on the boogie board wohooooo I yelled as I flew over the pit. And continued down the hill. Yeehah I yelled as I came over a sand cliff. I landed then bailed out. "That was awesome" yelled Gracsion I jumped up and gave him a high five.
by Eli
skater jumping
by Owen
Me, Sam and George clambered to the top of the l shaped ramp.
Suddenly a skater came riding up as we dived off.
Sam suddenly jumped up off the ground and snuck his L and P on and the next skater hit the L and P.
Me,George and Sam started to put our hands on our mouths and climbed up again.
We then sprung off again and I climbed up.
The next skater came rushing up then he went flying up the ramp.
I nervously jumped off in time then Sam asked where his L and P was.
by Owen
Me, Sam and George clambered to the top of the l shaped ramp.
Suddenly a skater came riding up as we dived off.
Sam suddenly jumped up off the ground and snuck his L and P on and the next skater hit the L and P.
Me,George and Sam started to put our hands on our mouths and climbed up again.
We then sprung off again and I climbed up.
The next skater came rushing up then he went flying up the ramp.
I nervously jumped off in time then Sam asked where his L and P was.
"Come on Mikayla!" I yelled as I ran up the grey ramp. When we reached the top Mikayla and I made a train. Mikayla was in front and I was at the back. Cold rushing water hit my cold legs as I started to get really wet. I started to go faster and the colourful walls turned blurry. "Splash!" I hit the bottom of the hydro slide. "Lets go again." Said Mikayla.
By Ellie!!!
By Ellie!!!
kayaking in kateriteri (in very bad conditons)
By Sam S.
Crash,bang as the water smashed against the little ,orange kayak like a Tiger startling its prey. Then another hit and another and one more it was like I was interfering with a boxing of land vs liquid then suddenly
a strong massive wave hit the weak kayak. Then another massive wave hit and me and the little kayak
got beached.
Anyway in the end I ended up getting beached twice.
"Come on Ellie" let's go on the twisty tube" I said. We sprinted up the cold, grey ramp to the fast colorful tube. I wanted to do the train so I said "Ellie you go in the front". So Ellie did and when we got down to the bottom Ellie and I saw Michael, Lewis and Harry.Then we raced up to the top and they won, so they hid so we went down first. The HYDRO SLIDE was fun, colorful, awesome and amazing. !!!!!!
BY MIKAYLA !!!
BY MIKAYLA !!!
Clip, clop! Clip, clop! The drumroll beat of Hopi's hooves echoed over the water. The smell of horse hair filled my nose as he broke into a trot. "Up, down, up, down." were the thoughts that went through my head.The rushing river flowed like molten glass over the shiny brown rocks. Clip, clop! Clip, clop! Hopi tossed his head and snorted as we slowed to a walk. His shiny brown mane was silky soft under my fingers when I reached out to stroke him. Huge green willow trees divided us from the river as if a humongous natural curtain had just been drawn across the damp riverbank. THUD!!! The loud noise broke the natural silence. "What was that?" I thought. I glanced backwards and saw a figure sitting on the dry ground, tying it's shoelaces.
skate race
WHOOSH!!!!!! cold air brushed past my face as we entered the large tennis court.I sneakily pasted Hadi and was in the lead.As we rounded a few tight corners Hadi tried to pass me but I nudged his skateboard a bit and started nearing the finish line.Excitement built up in me.YES!!!! I cried as i passed the finish line.
by James
WHOOSH!!!!!! cold air brushed past my face as we entered the large tennis court.I sneakily pasted Hadi and was in the lead.As we rounded a few tight corners Hadi tried to pass me but I nudged his skateboard a bit and started nearing the finish line.Excitement built up in me.YES!!!! I cried as i passed the finish line.
by James
Roasting Marshmallow
As the fire started up i started jumping up and down.
Me my brother to and mum get to have homemade hamburgers but the was 8:00 pm before we got cook the marshmallows.
" mm yum" i said my first marshmallow was delicious it was gooy on ythe inside and on the outside it was golden.
By Toby
As the fire started up i started jumping up and down.
Me my brother to and mum get to have homemade hamburgers but the was 8:00 pm before we got cook the marshmallows.
" mm yum" i said my first marshmallow was delicious it was gooy on ythe inside and on the outside it was golden.
By Toby
Splash! The curly waves hit my wet hands and the loud noises hurt my ears. I swam under water and it was totally quiet. I gasped for air deep down in the hot water. I pushed myself up to the top to get some air. I found a board and I decided to slide down the bright blue waves. It was kind of like surfing. "We're going in 5 minutes", said mum.
Veronika
As I raced towards the colourful tube I peered over my shoulder and saw Harry and Michael.I raced further and further towards the tube.I levitated into the air and closed my eyes.When I opened my eyes I saw clear water rushing me down the narrow tube.Soon I from the warm bright sun to the shadowy darkness.I could hear Harry's faint laugh in the distance.I rushed through the powerful rapids then I saw a glowing light growing bigger and bigger.Splash!.
Monday, October 14, 2013
Hi Room 3,
Welcome to Room 3's blog. Today I would like you to publish your moment in time writing on the blog. Once you have typed it out you can go and comment on someone else's moment in time writing. When you comment on their writing I would like you to give them one thing you liked about their writing and one thing they could add or do to their writing to make it even better.
Welcome to Room 3's blog. Today I would like you to publish your moment in time writing on the blog. Once you have typed it out you can go and comment on someone else's moment in time writing. When you comment on their writing I would like you to give them one thing you liked about their writing and one thing they could add or do to their writing to make it even better.
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