Popcorn
Popcorn popping like a machine gun firing popcorn into my mouth.
Popcorn flying into the air like mini golf balls.
Popcorn feels dry,fragile and delicate to the touch.
Pop pop pop goes popcorn as it launches itself into my mouth.
Popcorn tastes like a heaven all on its own.
When I hear popcorn popping I come running.
I can smell the sweet smell of butter and popcorn a long way away.
My hunting senses are tweaked to hunt popcorn so popcorn watch out
By Eli
By Eli
star hunting popcorn
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thanks owen
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DeleteStar: I like how you said popcorn tastes like heaven all on its own. I also think you used your sense really well to help paint a picture in the readers mind.
ReplyDeleteWish: Work on the sentence...... Popcorn popping like a machine gun firing popcorn into my mouth. Could you replace the word popcorn which is after the word firing to a different word?
Miss Collins