Tuesday, October 15, 2013

"Come on Ellie" let's go on the twisty tube" I said. We sprinted up the cold, grey ramp to the fast colorful tube. I wanted to do the train so I said "Ellie you go in the front". So Ellie did and when we got down to the bottom Ellie and I saw Michael, Lewis and Harry.Then we raced up to the top and they won, so they hid so we went down first. The HYDRO SLIDE was fun, colorful, awesome and amazing. !!!!!!

 BY MIKAYLA !!!

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2 comments:

  1. grantsbraesOctober 15, 2013 at 6:44 PM

    STAR: I like how you described the hydro slide.
    WISH: Use a better word than got.

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  2. grantsbraesOctober 15, 2013 at 6:50 PM

    Star: I liked how you described the setting saying "...fast colourful tube..."
    Wish: You should use a different word to 'got'

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