Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Tornado by Sam B

I am a Tornado.
Swish, I suck up houses then pit them back out.
Bamnm, my arrival scares everybody inside.
Children cry as I laugh loudly across the land.
When they se me coming they ring the bell to evacuate.
I am a Tornado.

By Sam B



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2 comments:

  1. grantsbraesOctober 30, 2013 at 6:50 PM

    I liked how you used your personification

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  2. grantsbraesOctober 30, 2013 at 6:51 PM

    i like how you said swish
    next time maybe have some more adj

    Toby

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