Tuesday, October 22, 2013

Pop! Pop! Pop! Went the balls of bouncing butter. Crunch! Crunch! Crunch! Went the small white fluffy clouds floating around in Mikayla's mouth. They tasted yummy warm butter melting in Mikayla's mouth. Then in seconds it was all gone!
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  1. grantsbraesOctober 22, 2013 at 6:46 PM

    I like how you used verbs

    no wishes

    eli

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  2. grantsbraesOctober 22, 2013 at 6:52 PM

    STAR: I like how you put bouncing butter balls
    NO wish
    FROM: Mikayla

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  3. grantsbraesOctober 24, 2013 at 1:29 AM

    Star: I like how you said the small fluffy clouds floating around in Mikayla's mouth.

    Wish: See if you can add what the popcorn smelt like.

    Miss Collins

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