Pop! Pop! Pop! Went the balls of bouncing butter. Crunch! Crunch! Crunch! Went the small white fluffy clouds floating around in Mikayla's mouth. They tasted yummy warm butter melting in Mikayla's mouth. Then in seconds it was all gone!
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I like how you used verbs
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STAR: I like how you put bouncing butter balls
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Star: I like how you said the small fluffy clouds floating around in Mikayla's mouth.
ReplyDeleteWish: See if you can add what the popcorn smelt like.
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