Tuesday, October 15, 2013
Splash! The curly waves hit my wet hands and the loud noises hurt my ears. I swam under water and it was totally quiet. I gasped for air deep down in the hot water. I pushed myself up to the top to get some air. I found a board and I decided to slide down the bright blue waves. It was kind of like surfing. "We're going in 5 minutes", said mum.
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I like how you used heaps of adjectives
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lewis!!
Star: I like the way discribed the waves
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sophia
My wish is to get better at show not tell because I'm not really good at it :)
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