Popcorn
Pop!,pop!,pop!, Popcorn looks like white balls of cotton wool. Popcorn is crunchy and sugary. They are like sweet treats. Popcorn is hot,hard,bumpy and soft. Popcorn smells buttery and I can hear the popcorn whirling and popping.Pop!,pop!,pop!.
by Christiaan
Star: I like how your started your poem with Pop! Pop! Pop! as it really captured my attention.
ReplyDeleteWish: When you write a poem each new sentence needs to start on a new line
Miss Collins