Popcorn
I taste the popcorn, it is cold.
It gets sweeter every time I taste.
Everyone stares at the white popcorn.
It feels light, I hope no one gets into a fight.
I could hear a buzz & a fuzz, everyone talks all day long.
I smell the strong smell with a long sniff .
By Dylan
star I liked how you said that 'it gets sweeter every time I taste'
ReplyDeletewish may be you could have a bit more rhyming words
Veronika