kayaking in kateriteri (in very bad conditons)
By Sam S.
Crash,bang as the water smashed against the little ,orange kayak like a Tiger startling its prey. Then another hit and another and one more it was like I was interfering with a boxing of land vs liquid then suddenly
a strong massive wave hit the weak kayak. Then another massive wave hit and me and the little kayak
got beached.
Anyway in the end I ended up getting beached twice.
I LIKE HOW YOU SAID LIKE A TIGER STAARTLING ITS PRAY
ReplyDeleteBY OWEN
I like how you described the kayak as a "tiger".
ReplyDeletefrom megan
star I liked your use of description
ReplyDeletewish make sure your sentences make sense
by eli
I like how you said it was like a boxing match!
ReplyDeleteBy CS