POPPING , POPCORN!!!
Popping popcorn crunches in Ellie's white teeth.
Ellie could see the fluffy, white clouds.
Popcorn feels like bumpy cotton balls in Ellie's soft hand's.
Ellie could hear a gun firing popcorn into a pool of warm buttery popcorn.
Ellie love's popcorn.
BY MIKAYLA !!!
Popping popcorn crunches in Ellie's white teeth.
Ellie could see the fluffy, white clouds.
Popcorn feels like bumpy cotton balls in Ellie's soft hand's.
Ellie could hear a gun firing popcorn into a pool of warm buttery popcorn.
Ellie love's popcorn.
BY MIKAYLA !!!
Star: I like how you used lots of adjectives!
ReplyDeleteWish: Use a few more verbs!
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